| Reviews for Clouds |
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   moonarised polane chapter 1 . 10/22/2004 nice job. maybe you could use this to write a longer poem? and bring out the dreamy-like quality that i find in this haiku even further. |
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 7/4/2004 i liked this more than the other |
| MayaJade chapter 1 . 7/4/2004 It is short and sweet and lets me see through your eyes for a moment... keep it up! You can look at some of my poems if you like. |