Reviews for Clouds
moonarised polane chapter 1 . 10/22/2004
nice job.
maybe you could use this to write a longer poem? and bring out the dreamy-like quality that i find in this haiku even further.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 7/4/2004
i liked this more than the other
MayaJade chapter 1 . 7/4/2004
It is short and sweet and lets me see through your eyes for a moment...
keep it up! You can look at some of my poems if you like.