Reviews for Your photograph
Noel17 chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
this would make a great hit.
AmethystTrish chapter 1 . 7/8/2004
i can so totally relate. awesome song! i especially like how the mind goes back and forth, wanting to get over them, but not at the same time. again, wonderful job!
To Venus and Back chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
Oh, wow. This is almost like a professional song. You should consider actually making this into a song. I'd love to hear it! Very touching, pretty song. Great work!
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
aw...this is very expressive and yet kind of depression. but i can tell that you really love this guy and guess what? i can also relate.
anyway, i loved the repitition, word cohices, rhyming and metaphors that you used to create your overall mood. i especially loved the lines:
"I would drown in a lake of fire
You're the one that can take me higher
And I still love you
Because you're my desire"
also the lines:
"Your name is tatoo'ed across my heart,
Forever etched in place".
Very magnificently done! Thanks for sharing and keep writing!
lisaslife chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
Im not really a song writer, but to me this seems great. I can identify with it and the chorus is filled with feeling. Good Job!