|Reviews for I want someone to break me|
| Crimsonoaks chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
i think it is good, but u are putting too many things in one. You first are saying how u want someone to break u, then u more to something inside u, then to another person. U need better transitions, it will make more sense that way. or u can try to split it up into different poems, i dont know, but that is my advice.