Reviews for Le Terre de Dieu
Simian chapter 1 . 4/9/2005
Le genre de... court.
mormonboy chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
Yue T. K. Sumeragi chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
Where's the poem? This is two lines and they barely rhyme. Have you type it in a translation/search engine? Because your verbs are all wrong (for instance). Why is it in the english category?
A grammatically correct version would be:
"Ceci est mon second poème et j'espère que vous allez apprécier! Donnez moi vos commentaires s'il-vous-plaît!
**~La Terre de Dieu~**
Il est vrai que Dieu a juxtaposé le ciel et l'enfer
Afin de créer la Terre."
I conceide it is only your second french poem but you could have tried a beta nonetheless. Keep trying.
erin chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
Akio the Dragon Master chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
i'm guessing it's in french... it sounds pretty! - i wish i knew what it meant though...