very good it kept my intrest through the whole thing. i dont know of a title though but i really conected with it i geuss lol it seems like it came straight from my mind

Dude, your poems rock..they have lots of emotion in them and you can tell...also in my poem i acutally did't mean for it to rhyme it just kinda happens

wow. this is so amazing. u give great imagary. it's such a treat to read your work.

amazing amazing amazing...i like the exploding emotion that comes from the poem...it makes u feel what's going on in the poem...very descriptive which makes the feeling enhanced...and it sort of gives it a depressing feeling yet i want to use the word courageous but something more of a martyr maybe? i can't exactly think of the word now but your poem is absolutely pourning with emotion and venting emotion as well...i like it very much

Hey! Wow! I really like the description here, great job!

er...WOW... i love it.
heh...a title... somehow i don't think one Could find an appropriate title for it...
maybe just 'confinement'? or 'solitude'?
hehe, i'm horrible at titles.
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