I was reading the review answer below mine and I thought how it really pisses me off when cops blame women for provoking the rape because of what they wear. It's not exactly like they wear 'rape me' signs on their backs! They don't ask to be raped. If they hadn't wanted to be raped, then why would they go to the police after? It's disgusting.

BABY, YEAH! Okay that was a bit, over the top, (my answer) but yes I'm happy. Even though before the kiss was an upsetting scene...still! Very enjoyable. Lex is complex. So is Rita. Rita doesn't seem like a doormat in the first couple chapters, and Lex switches moods like crazy.(probably to protect himself..)The whole Alexander and Tash thing was an eye-catcher (like that matters). Onwards...I want to KIDNAP Lex and make him MINE! Okay, I'm probably just making you back away in fear (Ah! She's physco! Hide the knives! Hide the Children!) He's the one of the yummiest guys on Fictionpress. If he was real, I'd knock Rita unconcious and steal him Mine.

Okay, Lex-obsessive rant is ! I love my chocolate. Thanks for making my day (besides the fact that my bro bought this totally awesome video game where you play the guitar! Yay! I can play Iron Man! MAd Skillz!) Don't end the story yet!Make some good grades!Luck, luck, love,-Avey

Thanks so much for updating! This chapter was very good! Alexander is such a fucking bastard! Grr! Lex, is so awesome! So Raven is going to be in here more, huh? Thats cool! Hurry with a update!

P.S- Thanks for the cookie!

CayRae-SkySong

another cliffy...and a make out session lol xD ... great chapter like always update soon.

OH. MY. GOD. Alexander must die. I hope Rita and Lex team up to form like a super killing machine or something and totally decimate Alexander, because that's what he deserves. I'm serious! Or at least have someone beat the crap out of him...

Very serious. Amusing phone prank though, I shall have to try that sometime. Thank you for updating (finally) so now I can put my knife away. *smile* Ta-ta!

*SCREAM* Why. Aren't. You. Updating? GAH! I'm gonna throw pillows! Yes, I've realized you have a life, but updating is part of it! GR! I want my sexy Lex! I want to see some action between Rita and Lex. If you have some kissing scenes between them, I MIGHT forgive you. Update Update Update! Love you more than apple pie and toast (which is alot!),

UPDATE!-Avey

I really like where this story is going, and the way you describe things is truly amazing. Lex sounds so hot! Can I have him? Haha. Okay, well keep updating as quick as you can!

-bananama-

i love lex! he's jst SO sexeh! oh! need an extra character cuz im all 4 it! hahahahaha! keep d updates coming! they're totally fab... ps... do you know where i can go and find my very own lex?

In one sitting I had managed to read all 8 chapters, and I just have to say, WHOA! Really, really good story. Psychotically entertaining and I really like the writing. Can't wait for the update. If only I could find a hot demoralized crazed sea god eyed stalker of my own someday. Oh to dream. Btw Lex is awesome! _

looking forward to your next chapter

My GOSH! Your work is simply INCREDIBLE! I DON'T believe it's me who's saying this, but if you didn't update for two years, I'd still be absolutely incapable of resisting the urge to keep checking up on this story. But all that aside, you need to make more use of comas and proff read it more. Too often, the words are in such a strange order, you can't make out what you're trying to say. Other than that... THIS IS BLOODY TERRIFIC

O_O I hate chocolate! Sorry...

Wait...'first time around'? You mean he's done it before? What a bastard! I swear, Rita should've made sure he went around balless. I bet he's raped girls too. Is he bi-polar or something?

Lex is sensitive; considering he'd do anything for Rita. I'm guessing he'll get his...friends and gang up on Jefferson? Tell me Rita will do something about it! She just can't let it go!

Yea, SolisLuna writes nice poems. You know chocolate tastes so funky now, in the bad kind of way...heh, yeh, I'm jumping topics. Keep writing!

IceCold13

the first time around? Alexander did that BEFORE and he didn't get that it HURTS when yo ubite hard? and then i would just like to add a "Hah! i knew it!" well... sort of. i had a little feeling that Alex had a crush on Rita. a tiny one but... still. ::smiles so big her mouth seems to come off her face:: Who! oh yeah! i love being right... does it show? lol

Lex Rocks though a tad OVERprotective. Xander is an IDIOT all letters capital, who is allegedly a sex offender and who will be dead in a matter of minutes. And can you make the cookie a sugar one? They are my favorite! And I thnak you for the update! This story is rocking!

Yay llamas! Nice developments in this chapter. Are Rita's parents actually going to pick someone for her to marry, or are you just mentioning that in the story? Lex is such a sweetheart, I heart him. And I heart chocolate. And bunnies! And cookies!