Reviews for A Smothering Sea
pointythings chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
This is good, but I think you could expand on it. I'm not a big believer in short poems. I think you could come up with some more original thoughts about this topic.
erin chapter 1 . 7/17/2004
beutiful!
Given to Fly chapter 1 . 7/7/2004
pretty :)
Akio the Dragon Master chapter 1 . 7/6/2004
- pretty!-
FireNeiko chapter 1 . 7/6/2004
Oh, *clapps* Wonderful imagery!
Emi Amara chapter 1 . 7/6/2004
Hi! Nice poem, it paints imagery!
Keep writin
**WG