Reviews for Gorgeous Girl
PaganScribe chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
weird but i like.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/10/2004
everyone is afrain of love no matter what sex they like and you point that out awesomely.. it also sounds very dreamlike the way things switch and the language you use... ncie job!
Restless Brook chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
That was a very cool poem-I especially enjoy the vulnerabilty of it all, which you portray so very well. Good job!
Aleara chapter 1 . 7/7/2004
Strange. This reminds me of a dream I had once. Oh well, the world is fixed! :)
Allie
Justread chapter 1 . 7/6/2004
This is a great poem. Good job. I like how you said she could hurt you as much as a boy. Very true. Keep it up