wouldn't let me sign in, but I decided to review anyway. It's a good poem, if somewhat creepy. Question, the first round, did he shoot his little sister? Thanks for the review. Keep writing.
~Sao

this is really sad
try to make the lines a little shorter and flow together more

I liked the last line. Good poem, kind of depressing with all the death. It was a tad confusing, but it added to the chaos. I liked it.