Reviews for Soul Sheltered
Scarlet Starfire chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
Wow...that's amazing, and so true. Sorry...I'm not good with reviews, but I REALLY like this. *claps*
Neon Purple Nailpolish chapter 1 . 11/1/2004
Kinda morbid though powerful and so very true for some. I like it.
Athena's girl chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
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this is scarily beautiful...
singingspeechless chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
very dramatic! i love it!
Sterces chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
Wow... I really like that one... Heck, I love all your stuff... But nice job!
Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 7/11/2004
Nicely conveyed emotion regarding the pain of internalising.
Well Done
Keep Writing!
F.C
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/10/2004
Ive felt that way sometimes... my poem no escape is kinda about that.. I liek it... especially the swimming and jumping in part... sounds so fun!
EndlessLove4u chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
Love it! Deep emotions...really nice J.
catseyeview chapter 1 . 7/7/2004
beautiful, adding to my fav stories list.
CydCharisse chapter 1 . 7/7/2004
*clap clap clap!* I ADORE your poems!
But dag nabbit, I can never EXPRESS how I feel about your poems...so I always feel incredibly lame reviewing...but still! Good job!
Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 7/6/2004
O_O you are SO GOOD! The end really made the poem. You are the Goddess at extended metaphor poems! *genuflects*
bubblesugarsocks chapter 1 . 7/6/2004
That's kind of true for all of us, huh? We're all lost... some more than others. Maybe heaven is when you finally are completely free.
-Corbyjane
Celestial-Sorrow chapter 1 . 7/6/2004
O Jessika, very nice! it's short and really...wow. Hmpt... hard to explain.
It's a little confusing, interesting but the ending line both explains it all and ends it beautifully.
bach-player chapter 1 . 7/6/2004
interesting write jenn