Reviews for I Pray
Crazy Biene chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
Is this where the BIG change came in? I love the poem.
Serene Waters chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
M, sad. I have a few friends like that. I probably won't see them again either. Smoothly done.
Athena's girl chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
Do you know what's really scary?
I have a poem almost exactly like this.
yours is better though...
singingspeechless chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
really cool, although sad in a way. ur a very good writer.
Joey7691 chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
It gives off a mystirious vibe to me...
Nice work. I like it.
Sterces chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
Another wonderful job. This reminds me of an old friend of mine for some weird reason... But THUMBS UP! P
Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 7/11/2004
Wonderfully emotional and imapactive.
You have a very distinct talent.
Very Well Done,
EndlessLove4u chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
GREAT poem...I liked it alot! Great job!
orphius chapter 1 . 7/7/2004
A Wonderful piece. The number of ways you descibe how this person's essence is now within you is great. Very real emotions.
p.s. thanx for your review of 'little candle'. You seriously made my day.
catseyeview chapter 1 . 7/7/2004
This is beautiful! Thank you for all your compliments, from one writer to another, your writing is also deep and thoughtful, I am more than happy to include you in my book! I wish I could do more, I do really appreciate all your reviews. Do write!
DefianceIsMe chapter 1 . 7/7/2004
I like the lines "You are the shards of glass/that are imbedded into my soul." It's so permanent and painful. GJ.
Autumnymph chapter 1 . 7/7/2004
As always, your poems make me go 'wow'. I like the part 'I can't bleed you out, ever' it's just... beautiful and sad.