Reviews for I Pray
Crazy Biene chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
Is this where the BIG change came in? I love the poem.
Serene Waters chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
M, sad. I have a few friends like that. I probably won't see them again either. Smoothly done.
Athena's girl chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
Do you know what's really scary?
I have a poem almost exactly like this.
...
yours is better though...
singingspeechless chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
really cool, although sad in a way. ur a very good writer.
Joey7691 chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
It gives off a mystirious vibe to me...
Nice work. I like it.
Sterces chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
Another wonderful job. This reminds me of an old friend of mine for some weird reason... But THUMBS UP! P
Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 7/11/2004
Wonderfully emotional and imapactive.
You have a very distinct talent.
Very Well Done,
KEEP WRITING!
F.C
EndlessLove4u chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
GREAT poem...I liked it alot! Great job!
orphius chapter 1 . 7/7/2004
A Wonderful piece. The number of ways you descibe how this person's essence is now within you is great. Very real emotions.
-orph
p.s. thanx for your review of 'little candle'. You seriously made my day.
catseyeview chapter 1 . 7/7/2004
This is beautiful! Thank you for all your compliments, from one writer to another, your writing is also deep and thoughtful, I am more than happy to include you in my book! I wish I could do more, I do really appreciate all your reviews. Do write!
DefianceIsMe chapter 1 . 7/7/2004
I like the lines "You are the shards of glass/that are imbedded into my soul." It's so permanent and painful. GJ.
Autumnymph chapter 1 . 7/7/2004
As always, your poems make me go 'wow'. I like the part 'I can't bleed you out, ever' it's just... beautiful and sad.