Reviews for A Stone Thrown in the Ceiling Fan Feeling
Mina Carlisle chapter 1 . 9/24/2004
I love this poem! It's very good, and the title makes it very interesting. Thanks for reviewing Cinderellis! And no, you weren't to hard on me, I've had worse done by my AP teacher. Most of the corrections you mentioned I had noticed after I had posted when I was reading it again, but I was just to lazy to fix it. If I ever revise it, I'll make those corrections. I can always use constructive criticism. And some of the oddly worded sentences, I write weird generally and those sentences are the product of my uncommon style, my mother tells me that I need to re word sentences a lot in my essays because I neglect "to be" verbs every time I write essays and sometimes that happens in my stories. But thanks for the review and I hope you'll read the rest of it. Good poem!
Lady Meriadoc
Fiontari chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
I can relate to this, for one of my biggest fears is being alone without someone to turn to. You capture the feeling of loneliness so well in this. It's wonderful! Thanks for the review of "Forever Be" btw. Keep writing.
Hawke
Clodhopper chapter 1 . 8/11/2004
sad but seemingly heartfelt. good job
Mack
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/10/2004
I know how that feels.. awesome descriptions of lonliness... great job!