that is really good i can't wait to read your other stories untill next time bye

i REALLY liked this one...it was just realy realy relaly realy god (and im hoping that my elongated letters got the point across P )

great poem! i really liked it a lot. I was trying to review the other poenm when my computer froze but I would have wrote that it was beautiful and it was definately going on my favorites. too bad u took it off though p i think i still might have a copy of it.
beautiful poems, anyway.

that was GREAT! sounds like it should be a song.

What on earth is going on? What did you do? Oh well, I guess poetry doesn't have to make sense if it sounds good! (Which yours does!:)