Reviews for Okay
PaganScribe chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
Profound and simple.
thanks for my reviews i guess you owe some more? ;)
unjaundiced chapter 1 . 7/16/2004
simple and wonderful. i don't know what else to say.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/8/2004
definatelly cool... I can relate
Zik chapter 1 . 7/8/2004
I like it. It's a bit sad, but there's that little glimmer of hope in the last line.
ac chapter 1 . 7/8/2004
Lol I don't like haikus because they are short but if you could use a series of haikus and make a longer poem it would be perfect. Lol.
Luv ya!
Allie
empty account chapter 1 . 7/7/2004
Great seventeen syllable message! Most people have a hard time putting real meaning in their Haiku but not you.