Reviews for She
Ultimate Schuyler chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
This was... okay, I'll say it. It sounded cool, but it was seriously prose. If you had put this in a paragraph, it would have said the same exact thing. It's more like a story, not a poem. But I still like it, though. Kind of clich├ęd, but whatever. _ Um... I was kind of hoping you would review one or two of my poems... Yeah. I like your penname. Is it supposed to mean "black wings"? Because actually, if it is, then that should be "kuroi tsubasa"... But, I like it how it is more. _