Reviews for The Pawnees
Natali G. Williams chapter 3 . 8/2/2004
oh...i love it. I can't wait for more. Please hurry and update.
Bang Bang chapter 1 . 7/18/2004
I was wondering why you didn't start the story with the part about Jim and Rachel being married five years, then progress from there? Overall I believe you did very well and you are a good writer. I will add you to my favorites list. Nice to finally see a western story on this site that did not include devils or vampires.
Midnight Proc chapter 2 . 7/9/2004
The dialouge and the story line is great so far - keep writing! (Did I already say that in my last review?... I don't remember).
Midnight Proc chapter 1 . 7/8/2004
Awesome introduction! Can't wait for the story to progress further!
Nyssa Tiania chapter 1 . 7/8/2004
not a bad start, quite interesting.