Reviews for The First
Sakura Reyna chapter 9 . 11/24/2009
"Whatever! It was a stupid little car that'll be demolished by the time I'm done with it. And no, Robyn won't be in it when I trash that thing"

"Payback's a bitch, ain't it?"

"Definitely a bitch in his case"

Sakura Reyna chapter 8 . 11/24/2009
"Devon, if you don't I'll toss you into a tree"

I'm glad Jess is alive, that was scary. (o0o)

"We had the same mother. But you got the good father. I got the whack job"

Oh no...what now...?
Sakura Reyna chapter 7 . 11/24/2009
"Come out, come out wherever you are"- LOL

Jessie...Mazel was her Mumma? That nice lady was...

NO EFFIN WAY...Dr Wlyson was her papa?

Sakura Reyna chapter 6 . 11/24/2009
Jess and Devon forever...

"Cat and mouse is it? All right then, I like games..."

This is gonna be sweet! Dr. Syringe is in a corner, yay!
Sakura Reyna chapter 5 . 11/24/2009
"Yes. You've got to be extra careful of him. He's gotten a lot crazier since you last saw him. He's got it in for you"

"So, he hates me with a passion, in a sense. Hmm, this could be useful"


Thank you, Mysterious Stranger!

Damn Dr. Wylson and his stupid syrringes! What's in those things anyhow? I'd like to poke him with a few!

I have a feeling that Jess has no idea how "strong " she truly is...Don't die, Jessie!

OMG...I bet Dr. Wlyson had no toy soldiers to play with when he was little...sarcasm...Crap. They can feel each other's pain, too...

Evan, be strong!
Sakura Reyna chapter 4 . 11/24/2009
OMG...They could hear each other's dreams while they sleep? Heh hee...

Oh man, those kids better be careful, and those scientists shouldn't underestimate them, either.
Sakura Reyna chapter 3 . 11/24/2009
Michelle bends the pipe.


Michelle breaks the bent pipe.



It's so cute-everyone's practicing their powers so they can kick some butt, awesome!

Evan gets a peek into Jessica's past...physic

Devon & Jess forever.
Sakura Reyna chapter 2 . 11/24/2009
Well, I'm excited now. Evan and Jess contacted each other, that's good.
Sakura Reyna chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
Jessica is one brave little soldier...I remember Dr. Wlyson and his syringes from the other story. I remember Evan as well.
pinkfairydust chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
i really love this!
ForeverTwilightForeverDawn chapter 9 . 12/25/2005
Love it! My only problem is that Evan was exasperatingly helpless the entire time. But otherwise, it's awesome!
ForeverTwilightForeverDawn chapter 1 . 12/25/2005
Ooh, I like it! It's really suspenseful, and it actually made me keep reading through the whole thing, which is sort of unusual.
Si Lennite chapter 9 . 12/14/2004
AWZ. So good. Much applause to the wonderful writer that you are. i enjoyed every word. Keep it up
Si Lennite chapter 8 . 12/14/2004
WHO! THEY ALL MADE IT OUT! but i bet so did the bad guys, otherwise the story would be over. lol
gpshaw chapter 1 . 12/13/2004
A good concept, good story idea. I'll try and read more later.
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