|Reviews for The First|
| Sakura Reyna chapter 9 . 11/24/2009
"Whatever! It was a stupid little car that'll be demolished by the time I'm done with it. And no, Robyn won't be in it when I trash that thing"
"Payback's a bitch, ain't it?"
"Definitely a bitch in his case"
| Sakura Reyna chapter 8 . 11/24/2009
"Devon, if you don't I'll toss you into a tree"
I'm glad Jess is alive, that was scary. (o0o)
"We had the same mother. But you got the good father. I got the whack job"
Oh no...what now...?
| Sakura Reyna chapter 7 . 11/24/2009
"Come out, come out wherever you are"- LOL
Jessie...Mazel was her Mumma? That nice lady was...
NO EFFIN WAY...Dr Wlyson was her papa?
Okay it is SO ASS KICKIN TIME!
| Sakura Reyna chapter 6 . 11/24/2009
Jess and Devon forever...
"Cat and mouse is it? All right then, I like games..."
This is gonna be sweet! Dr. Syringe is in a corner, yay!
| Sakura Reyna chapter 5 . 11/24/2009
"Yes. You've got to be extra careful of him. He's gotten a lot crazier since you last saw him. He's got it in for you"
"So, he hates me with a passion, in a sense. Hmm, this could be useful"
Thank you, Mysterious Stranger!
Damn Dr. Wylson and his stupid syrringes! What's in those things anyhow? I'd like to poke him with a few!
I have a feeling that Jess has no idea how "strong " she truly is...Don't die, Jessie!
OMG...I bet Dr. Wlyson had no toy soldiers to play with when he was little...sarcasm...Crap. They can feel each other's pain, too...
Evan, be strong!
| Sakura Reyna chapter 4 . 11/24/2009
OMG...They could hear each other's dreams while they sleep? Heh hee...
Oh man, those kids better be careful, and those scientists shouldn't underestimate them, either.
| Sakura Reyna chapter 3 . 11/24/2009
Michelle bends the pipe.
Michelle breaks the bent pipe.
It's so cute-everyone's practicing their powers so they can kick some butt, awesome!
Evan gets a peek into Jessica's past...physic imprints...wow...
Devon & Jess forever.
| Sakura Reyna chapter 2 . 11/24/2009
Well, I'm excited now. Evan and Jess contacted each other, that's good.
| Sakura Reyna chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
Jessica is one brave little soldier...I remember Dr. Wlyson and his syringes from the other story. I remember Evan as well.
| pinkfairydust chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
i really love this!
| ForeverTwilightForeverDawn chapter 9 . 12/25/2005
Love it! My only problem is that Evan was exasperatingly helpless the entire time. But otherwise, it's awesome!
| ForeverTwilightForeverDawn chapter 1 . 12/25/2005
Ooh, I like it! It's really suspenseful, and it actually made me keep reading through the whole thing, which is sort of unusual.
| Si Lennite chapter 9 . 12/14/2004
AWZ. So good. Much applause to the wonderful writer that you are. i enjoyed every word. Keep it up
| Si Lennite chapter 8 . 12/14/2004
WHO! THEY ALL MADE IT OUT! but i bet so did the bad guys, otherwise the story would be over. lol
| gpshaw chapter 1 . 12/13/2004
A good concept, good story idea. I'll try and read more later.