i LOVE this story! please, Please, PLEASE UPDATE!

very intersting...i could so be that girl i could so handle seraph.. lets go big guy! buy the way my name is amber, i am 5'11 have green eyes, and long brwonish blonde hair, i am 18 and still a virgin, [. lets go big guy, 5 bucks says i could take you in a fight.

Okay I hate writing reviews like this especially to people I don't know. I like your concept, and I like the first chapter enough that I intend to read the rest.

Bust the thing that drove me crazy was your diction.

Even though yes technically desperateness is a word, it doesn't sound so refined. I notice you are fond of that particular suffix. When it's used too often, it sounds kind of cheesy.

Sorry if this came off as mean, but my only intention was to help. I don't know if you have a beta but that might help some.

OK OK OK. You must update. And rather soon. Because from what I see, you haven't updated in a while. Anyhow.

You story is adorable in all its awesomeness. That's why I'm reviewing. And such. But, please update. You're driving people crazy. _ Maybe that's a good thing, huh?

Hmm... You're story... *growls*

I love it! *pounces on Staris and huggles* But, I must admit, you are quite behind on updates! *becomes all strict like* You must update!... pwease?

*Gives Staris a white rose* I got way too many of em OO

‘Hey guess what I’m a vampire’ ‘Oh okay…Ah’

mail order brides that come in crates! Wtf? Lmao… damn not again. ::goes looking for her ‘a’ that she just ‘lo’ed:: btw I really LOVE this story ::snuggles sean:: you’re too cute “3 ::huggles seraph:: .you -

Hey! I think that this is a great story but I also think that you should read this one The Seelie Court Book One: The Crystal Crown by Uriel Rhiannon. It is heaps good but I think that they need our support so get reading and start reviewing so that they can finally update. Please!

first off i freaking love this story it is so unbelievably cute~! *snuggles story* and because i am anal retentive and taking latin it is 'et tu' as in 'and you'

May you please update soon, not only are you sending me crazy but your also sending all your other reader's crazy with having to wait. With that I think this is a great story and I am very impressed with how you manage to display emotions for each of the characters. Well done! SO update.

Chao!

Hey! I wont say nythang about your grammar coz you already know... and no one's perfect, scpecially moi! I am loving your story. It's my the first time I have read a m/m story. OH :D! This story is so excitting! And your great with the raunchy scenes...very picturesque! Keep up with the chappies other wise I'll go bonkers just having to wait... man, sum people take like foreva to put up their next chappies...:( Chao! Jaquinta

Your grammar is quite incorrect at times. However you have a great story going on here. Your chapters are set at a good pace, not too short and not too lenghty. I am really enjoying the read! Keep it up Gal'! Chao! Jaqui

Good story! Update soon! I'm *way* interested in Father's reaction. But I have a feeling it'll be good! Update soon!

OMG! In this sentence: “Is it okay if I stay here?” Sean asked quietly straddling Seraph’s waste." I think the word you're looking for it *waist*. B/c with "waste" he's straddling the mans crap! I thought it was funny!

Well, that was a crazy chapter, if I do say so myself. So much happened. What's going to happen with Seraph and Devon's father coming to see them? I'm sure he's probably not going to be very amused by their antics.

Hope the inspiration is with ya'. Keep it up! :-)