wow man, a little depressing i must say, but isnt the whole point of poetry expression and exorcism? if not, then i have been lied to. I liked the way it was written, very descriptive and gets the message across, but rememberm theres always love in the circle (and no i'm not being religious) ;)
- Novi

hey hey, I read your poem as you asked me to... I would have anyways. That is pretty morbid and depressing... very depressing.. :( Don't take this poem down, keep it up on here. I don't know much to say besides..wow.. it really is depressing and I am sorry.

Hey... This one is definately depressing.. but i found it very well written.. and if you were trying to acheive a certain sense of angst here... you definately got it!
~Blessings~
~Chele~

that was a strong poem. I could really sense the sepair and anger. You did a good job of expressing your emotions. It is really good to write these kind of things down. Always remember that there will always be someone there. very good poem.