|Reviews for Suicidal Tendencies|
| Yaolyn chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
"Beauty disappear from within", I like that line (though -please don't eat me because I'm not an expert on English - shouldn't it be "disappears"? Because after he/she/it you add an 's' to the verb. Or was it like a command?)
I also like the pace it's written in and of course the poem itself. Everyone wants to be the boss.
| YukiSama chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
Very nice- emotional; captures eye of attention.
Well written-keep up the good work.
| The Darkness Of Death chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
It's different to read a poem which addresses a person who kills themself, rather than another one of many which are written from the individual's point of view when they committed suicide.
| Katherine-Elizabeth chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
Sweet... the word popped in my head when I read the last line. I love the poem. *fav*
| Lady Arianrhod chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
Awesome! I love the atmosphere you make come out of it. I really like the 'Blade slices the delicate skin'. I can't wait to read some of your other stuff!