Reviews for A Hole in the World
Delilah Brightman chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Incredibly sad but really well done. And good use of similes!
Choleric Mist chapter 1 . 10/11/2004
Sad poem :( I read your profile, if you still don't know how to set your poems out in stanzas or no breaks here's how...
Write or paste your poem in a program like "Notepad" and just upload it in document manager as a poem, it should work!