Reviews for Lazuli Synecdoche |
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![]() ![]() Lemons and oranges. Thats what Jace from Mortal Instruments said xD Man that line always cracks me up. |
![]() ![]() Both books read like an over dramatic playwright. Don't get me wrong, I still really enjoyed them, but no one talks like all the characters did in real life. The epilogue was the most genuine, to me. I'm still going to reread this again in a few months once I forget what it's about. |
![]() ![]() Damn do they like to dance around an issue with pretty words. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww I love Seba-kun and Tobe-chan! And I love your stories, Rhododendron Woes and this one! The angst made it more interesting, and I nearly stop reading cause I thought you might end it with them both moving on, Tobias with Amon and Sebastian with Ethan, but my yaoifan instinct insist on me to continue reading, and I have no regrets! Such amazing story, I love your writing style! Hope to hear more from you soon ;P |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read this and its prequel quite a while ago, but still remember them. They're both awesome; your writing's exceptional and you capture the characters really well. If I had a vice, it was those huge chunk paragraphs on philosophical and artistic muses, but I actually liked some of those. The characters were so real, and you did more than just a best friend romance; you took it to life. Just skipped to the ending line. Aw, I like how that flashbacked to their youthful days back in RW. "12/10/07 - Epilogue. "True love doesn't have a happy ending, because true love never ends."" Nice quote. I hope Seba and Tobias continue having their never-ending-happiness. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello! I just finished reading this and wanted to tell I really enjoyed it, I found it somehow more mature than the 'first part', and think your writing is quite good. I was especially surprised to find you write the character's thoughts in an unusual but most realistic way, and not with just the clichéd and repetitive ramblings that can be commonly found around here. So, even though the final development was kind of predictable, I enjoyed the reading, and I hope you'll be further working on your writing and encourage you to it. cheers |
![]() ![]() ![]() hurray! you updated! thank you! *off to read* |
![]() ![]() WOW! I'm so happy I stumbled upon this story It's has lots of angst but still manages to have the happy ending we... err... the characters for sharing it. |
![]() ![]() Your stories were beautifully written. They examined human nature, love, and life in an almost poetic manner. Amazing. |
![]() ![]() before I read this chapter I just want to say that I have been faithfully checking for updates for more than two years (does that sound right?. I love your talented, sophisticated writing and I can not express how delighted I am that you finally finished this story. Thank you so much. And now I'll READ! |
![]() ![]() OH man am I glad that you continued this! You brightened up my day when I say that after forever one of my favorite stories was finally continued. I cannot wait for your next story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! It was such a sweet and happy ending. I love it XD It makes me happy XD This was a wonderful story that made me suffer SO much, I love your characters and I love your writing. Hope to see a new story from you soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful two last chapters! I love them! They're finally together... and this sweet chapter is so much nicer after so many chapters filled with drama and suffering. That's why I love drama with a happy ending... well, I hope their ending is happy and I don't think you'll be that cruel,. They deserve to be happy and they are such a cute and heartbreaking couple. I loved that they are trying to be honest with each other, it was good that Sebastian made Tobias think about it. This chapter is going to help me and be awake until the early hours of the next morning, stupid exams. Thanks because you are writing this story even after so much time of not updating, I had almost lost hope that you would ever update. This is one of my favorite stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have a way with words that just blows my mind. You take your reader on a fine journey, from one extreme to another. I can't tell you how much I've enjoied this story and how glad I am that you have returned. Thank you for sharing this with the world. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() You came back! I'm so happy! I didn't think you would ever update this story! And it's almost over anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter! Wow, I'm using too many exclamation points but really, I think your updating made my night, especially after finishing my blasted research paper. :( but now I'm happy :) Wow, a lot of questions in this chapter! Seba's doing a lot of dissecting isn't he? It must be so confusing for him to go through all of his personalities and trying to remold himself together and try to figure out what kind of person he wants to be. So he's basically has been moping in his new bachelor pad the entire week of vacation? Meh, atleast he's not suicidal right? I wish we could know his emotions and thoughts when he saw that the painting that he loved was created by Tobias. But I guess if you don't want to share his thoughts then I guess I'll just have to make do with whatever I make up... Not much to really say about the chapter because it felt like one big question chapter/soul searching included. Overall I've loved the story and I think I sent you a PM a long long time ago but I can't remember if I did. I think, if I sent it, I asked when you were going to update/if the story was on hiatus because it had been a while since you had updated. But you're back now so that's not a problem anymore. It's so sad that it's coming to the end but I guess you can only have so much angst in Tobias and Seba's lives. Anyways, I'm so glad that you updated! *jumping for joy* erm, excuse that little interlude. Hope you update soon! vampgurl99 |