This is one of the most intresting poems i have read. ... fisrt off I love the word choices and the formmating you ussed,the tappered effect of the words convay the feeling of fire that is so present in this whole poem, second, the overall content of this peice is breathtaking, something so beutifull and refreshing in a well traversed theme. Third, I and facinated by some of your individual word choices, they create pictures so perfect and in touch with the entire thing, I cant wait to read more of your stuff.

Wow, I really like this. Great work.

~aw~ i always loved this poem