Reviews for Liar Liar
Yoi chapter 1 . 1/10/2005
hmmz teach a kindergarten or nursery kid tis poem and im sure u're gonna be fired by the principal.
Cinaed Born Of Fire chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
Ooh, I really liked the nursery rhyme quality to this poem. The imagery was wonderful, and I could really see someone teaching a little kid this rhyme. Well done.
~Cinaed
LordK chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
Nice rhyming scheme in poem... there were a lot of words repeated, could've changed the vocab a little bit, but as it was supposed to be a nursery rhyme, that's excusable. Nice poem.
Quilir chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
one part reminds me of a queens song: we will rock you
"you got mud on your face, you big disgrace"
See?
My suggestion, try to make it flow better, this could be a very good poem in the making.
That is, unless this is a poem that was used to help relieve stress on a problem relating to lying. Then, its fine how it is.
Teperehmi chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
it sounds really angry,and dark. Not too bad though.