Reviews for An Empty Man
Cari-anne chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
Even though this poem seems so short it holds so much. This was truly awesome. The way you showed how a person who is just like any other can be corrupted my circumstance. but still may not be a terrible person. I don't think that any of us are truly evil forever and that no one can be saved. If you look hard enough there is always something deep inside that makes someone not so different. In the seemingly worst person there is still something in them that makes them human and not as different from ourselves as we thought. With a second look we can surely find the good in someone.
AKA-CC chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
I like this very much.
I like how it shows we may change our impressions of someone by considering what it might be to walk in their shoes. We should do more of that as a society nowadays. It would change the world for the better.
I like the very short lines, the rapid pace, and the emotions, too.