whoa. that's deep. ur good at this_~*

that was totally good! u have real talent. i can only write dark depressing poetry, and it isn't evenm that good.

That was amazing! Oh, wow! I loved this one! The feeling in it is so intense and I can relate to this one so well! I know what it's like to want someone, but there is someone else in the way.
It feels like you really want to be that person just to get the love. You spend all that time crying and feeling bad and like you aren't good enough. Then you can figure out that it's his lose and life will go on. Yeah, it hurts, but hey, no pain, no gain.
Can I please print this out and put it on my notebook?
A rose for you...
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Wow. I loved Inuyasha, I know what its about I think, and i really liked it. It gave me chills. Very nice.
Also, thanks for the review, i changed some stuff on that poem but it hasnt laoded yet, check back later and tell me if you like it. Now I'm off to read more of your stuff...and this is going into my favorites list lol.
Much love
Valerie