Reviews for Fallen
Twisted Shadows chapter 1 . 10/20/2005
Wow... I like the repeating chorus-type thing, and my favorite lines are:

"Fallen Angels plummetingFrom their Heaven sweet,Gleaming wings fading,Feathers swirling 'round their feet."

It just flows so well! I love it! The first verse, in second person, is nice, because you feel as though it's /you/, and then you become sad at the next bit, and the third verse is oh-so moving!

Oh, je l'adore!

~ Twisted Shadows
tears-of-innocence chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
Wow, this is really good. The rhymings really good too. I like it!
Rain-in-the-Bucket chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
wow! this is a very nice poem! i like it a lot D! If you like fallen angels than maybe you could read mine, it's called the Blood of an Angel by Zhander's Girl! n-e-ways great poem, i'm just starting to read Wake, so far i like that as well. Go Xander! D well bye
darkdreamerx chapter 1 . 11/21/2004
Wow this is really good...and sad. :( Aww...you have a really good talent ]

faSt sPrinTer
Silver Ice 95 chapter 1 . 10/20/2004
Wow, I love it! It's so depressing and I think I already said I love it, but still!
wing chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
omg, this is so great and so sad! _ i LOVE IT! awsome job, favs definately!
Powerbunny chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
I've always loved this poem. You should post the picture to it up here too because it's really cool. Love the poem. ho!
MC chapter 1 . 7/16/2004
Yay! First review! Not something you'll find every day...
I love it! Sad, but good...