|Reviews for The Storm|
| SSK chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
Sorry, but I just didn't like this story. The pace alternates between exceeding speed and a near-stop too quickly, and the main character does not appear to have any direction, motivation, etc. Here are some ideas: How does the cloud to this man, and why? As he "masters" his power over the cloud, how does he use it to, say, get back at his old boss or cheating wife? Would he forget about them instead? What about his children? Try to answer questions like these in your story.