I like the way the poem is sort of ironic. I guess everyone is going to interpret it differently, but I see it as how some people think that they're in love, but are actually in love with themselves or something that they create.

hi really love this poem .. actually ive read some of your other stuff and you are very talented! i love how u said tat instead of suicide u chose this as your out let and as a fellow poet i can also say it is a go way to go too!.
and i also love ur profile its a amazing!
but i tink you could havea goodfurute with this if you keep it up and than you 4 thr good reads.

By far, this is my fave of yours, so far. This is beautiful. I have been in exactly that position, so t really struch a chord. This was a gorgeous piece. I love it!...and very seductively written. I have to hand it to you, this poem is truly a masterpiece.

This poem was really neat, I loved it :)

this is, in a word, masterpiece.
review me if you're free!
summerdazed