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Angelfish chapter 2 . 6/25/2005
Creepy and good, but a lot of spelling mistakes (ie tried not tryed, wiping not whipping)
Sang Yu Nung chapter 1 . 7/18/2004
Hey- I IMed you before and you told me to check out your story. It's pretty exciting, you have great description which you balance well with action. I will read the next chapter somewhat soon- if you get bored come check out my "marriage vs. murder" story- it'd be appreciated. Alrite, well write on!
Ric Pike chapter 2 . 7/13/2004
Wow, this is really good! Plenty of guns, violence, and rebelion. My favorite! Keep writing!
Louis the Rogue chapter 2 . 7/13/2004
The storyline is excellent, and I am eager to see where you will go with it. Will this one become a story of a man's redemption or the story of his eventual undoing? With an author like you there's just no telling. Patiently awaiting the next spin on this thrill ride story.
ku chapter 2 . 7/13/2004
good chapter. glad most of it was a dream. consider lowering the r-rating. r-rated stories are automatically censored by fictionpress. unless of course, there is massive violence and sexuality ahead.
ku chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
good so far. a few minor spelling mistakes.