Reviews for Jibun no Jisatsu
k8 chapter 1 . 1/24/2006
AMAZING! I LOVE IT! *hugs* you are the besterest ever! D keep up the awesome work!luv meh!
BlueAngel0104 chapter 1 . 7/11/2004
Oh, I like this a lot. It's really good and you got it to rhyme. Very impressive! Keep writing! I'd be honored if you'd read an dreview the story I posted on this site. Thanks in advance.
Eyes Unclouded chapter 1 . 7/11/2004
Cool poem! I love the ending especially, the part that says "I'll never know you...You are me." Because, really, how many of us actually DO know ourselves? (Also, I am in love with swords and the word "blade"!) My only criticism would be to tighten up some lines. For example, the one that says "in my hand the sword won't rust" rhymes with the one above it, but it doesn't really match it because it has more syllables (i.e., the above line is evenly divided by the comma, but the second line is not). Otherwise, I really liked it; please write more!
Zoe Peters chapter 1 . 7/11/2004
This portrays so much emotion, that words can barely describe it...
This was brilliant... continue writing..
Also please can you review on any of my poems... Thankyou
~Zoe~