Reviews for Saves me
karmakaze chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
I used to feel that way all the time about this guy at my school. My first poem was about him. Great job.
FaydedMarionette chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
I like the structure and the way you used repitition in this. Well done. I really like it alot.
William Ironclad chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
Very nicely done. Sad, but I like the ending. It is uplifting. I like it.
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IcyDevil27 chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
Wow. That's an awe-inspiring poem. Don't ever feel bad for believing in fairytales! Your poems rock. You have such a way of putting people's feelings into words!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 7/11/2004
that was great, wonderful job!
JC-Saved-Me chapter 1 . 7/11/2004
aww this is so sweet but sad. I love it! it portrays me so well! lol