Reviews for War Track
BlueRose218 chapter 1 . 4/26/2005
Oh my God! Someone else besides me acually made that connection! Iraq really is another version of Vietnam! I don't feel so paranoid about my paranoia anymore. And Bush really hasn't accomplished much, besides making Muslims and gays miserable. And Cheney hasn't accomplished anything at all.
Story-Teller's Aide chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
very powerful and strong, excellently written. would like to point out a favourite line but it was all written with much intellect and skill, so that i can't really give only one example.
thanks for reviewing my poems by the way.
Taka chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
sorry im not logged in...
anyway, excellent...precise and though lacking in certain imagery, still, tone and play on words are good...nice vision...think of writing one with bit more imagery? try conveying the tone form the point of view of the victims...its a thought
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the life pursuit chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
i cant really review a poem, i never thought poems were meant to be categorized into the "good" and "bad" kind, but then can express the feelings of more than one person, and thats what i think you've done