Reviews for The life he left behind
negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 8/26/2004
the ending is beautiful.
this is heartwrenching.
nesy chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
This is such a beautiful poem! It's full of emotion, though it's a little sad. I loved it.
Written In Stone chapter 1 . 7/11/2004
I really like this. I can kinda relate to the lose of someone u care about although I'm almost 15...anyways... This is awesome. I can't wait to read more peotry and songs from u.
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 7/11/2004
very effective write! i can totally relate to this and yes i understand your situation b/c i am experiencing it right now myself.
anyway, back to the poem. i loved your rhyming, word choices, as well as the repitition of the first stanza at the very end of the poem. thanks for sharing and keep writing!