Reviews for Sweet Sweet Ella
Juniper Nights chapter 1 . 11/23/2006
He loved her and she let her jealousy and anger take over. Thats incredibly sad. Well written though, great job.
The Latest Plague chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
oh my god... how freaky and sad... he wasn't even cheating! that woman has problems... stuart was cool. lol
PartyFairy chapter 1 . 8/2/2004
Hi there. I was going through stories when i stumbled on this one. I enjoyed it very much . i love the twist at the end! good job
fourlane chapter 1 . 7/17/2004
Nicely done! I do feel some remorse for Stuart, though. -_-
TesubCalle chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
I love the twisted-ness of it all. Really, what more can be said other than 'You write well' ?
Excellent characterizations and descriptions. I really felt Caroline's frustrations and jealousy.
What a thoroughly unimaginative and sterile house they live in. A perfect reflection of their pathetic marriage.
Truly well done, Aspen. Keep it up.
(But just remember that "fluorescent" is spelled with a 'u'! )
kimchicrackers chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
That was a good story. The last part made me laugh. Great detail, helps paint a full picture for the reader.
You're an awesome writer, keep up the good work.
Doc2 chapter 1 . 7/11/2004
Ah, nothing like bitter irony to make my day. Nice touches with those slight details like the popcorn ceiling and how the bathroom is so sterile. I think it's constructed very well too.