|Reviews for The World Within|
| Jackaroe chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
this poem is short and good and expresses its meaning in few words. i liked it a lot. wonderful way of telling the world about everyone's pain.
| Clockwork Angel chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
like the flow...like a vacuum of words fit together to form something yup nice write
| Akaiyume chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
It makes a powerful impression and ends with a Boom, at least how I read it.- Simply put: I like it, well done.
| the tuesday after chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
It rolls around on my tongue like a song, was it meant to be?