|Reviews for Today|
| Duble-Helix chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
:( I wish I couldn't relate to this. You're talented though, good job.
| decayinglife chapter 1 . 7/31/2004
a suicidal persons dream, to finally succeed at the soon inevitable. very good, i like it very much. always having to struggle with when they wake up from the bottle of pills, when the blood stops running, when the grass breaks the fall, when the noose looses, and they are so disappointed, so they live for just one more day until the next time, each time getting closer and closer to the goal, very well written.
| Ikuisuuden Teiden Kulkija chapter 1 . 7/20/2004
I like this...really dark :)
| NeuroticGothicLolitaDeathDolly chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
Very bloody. I love blood!
| A.D Williams chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
Just as I told you in our IM. This poem is wickedly awesome. It carries such an eery, haunting feel to it (as the rest of your songs) but what's even better is that the feeling stays fresh. The writing never gets old because each new song grasps another feeling. awesome
| kookytree chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
Extremely powerful- mainly because of your use of repetition, which really batters the emotions into your head. This poem is *driven* and it conveys the whole issue with potency and skill.
Hope you can check out my work
| black-heart-black-life chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
wow i like it you should read mine