Reviews for Helen
kookytree chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
Beautiful use of language and imagery- I particularly liked the stuff about her speaking many languages, but none of them ever speaking to her. You clearly have a good grasp of writing, the only issue I had with it was that it's sort of 'fanfic'-esque in that it concerns only emotional articulation, as opposed to plot development. But then, that was your intent, so I'll be quiet _.
Hope you can check out my story, I'd like to hear your perspective.