Reviews for Not That Any Knew
shea's surrender chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
wow. Amazing. I can totally relate to this, really appeals to the senses.
one complaint: the way it's formatted, it's a little confusing, but it's also like adding another dimension to the art.
it's great. really.
the third eye chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
your poem is lovely, the sentiment and feeling comes through clear. i especially like how you repeated some lines over. i have a small suggestion, however, that you work on the meter, especially from "with a few grim realizations...". keep up the good work