Reviews for For me
Ultimate Schuyler chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
That's all I here as I lie in bed.
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so I wont here the pain.
"hear" not "here"
but it wont.
"won't"
_ This was awesome... It was really really great.
I wish I would die.
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For me.
-were very powerful, powerful lines.
The last line... the saddest... my face droops, my eyes tear... This was a powerful poem...