Reviews for Come Back Home
Richard123 chapter 1 . 4/29/2021
Your story deserves a lot of audience, you can publish it on NôvelStar Mobile App.
aqua-angel chapter 1 . 7/29/2004
LoL nice ending. You did a good job with this chapter, it was pretty interesting. You could use a bit more descriptions, such as on the setting(ie grass, campsite, forest scene, etc). But you have very believable dialogue. Kudos to you! update soon