Reviews for Come Back Home |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Your story deserves a lot of audience, you can publish it on NôvelStar Mobile App. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LoL nice ending. You did a good job with this chapter, it was pretty interesting. You could use a bit more descriptions, such as on the setting(ie grass, campsite, forest scene, etc). But you have very believable dialogue. Kudos to you! update soon |