Reviews for The Hymn of the War Lords
Devonshirelass chapter 19 . 9/4/2004
I thought this was a lovely story. It had plenty of action, and was not too fluffy. Excellent combination.
passion101 chapter 19 . 8/30/2004
That was a cute epilogue! I'm glad that things turned out well for them. I'm just sad that it's over.
metropolis noir chapter 19 . 8/29/2004
A good epilogue. The pacing matched the rest of the story, which is nice. A happily ever after, hurrah. And the fact that you reminded us that he had nearly died was really good.
R.M.Whitaker chapter 19 . 8/29/2004
Oh! How cute! They had a little girl! Ok, I changed my mind! This is a great way to end the book. Iseult and Maddock seem verry happy together! This book now has Railee's (my) stamp of approval!
metropolis noir chapter 18 . 8/27/2004
You are awesome at describing battles! The only thing was that it was quite short, I would have liked to see Iseult's perspective on the battle, maybe Robert's as well. Multiple perspectives would add a more indepth battle scene, and would help the shortness.
Can't wait for the epilogue!
passion101 chapter 18 . 8/27/2004
SWEET! I love epilogues! However, don't u think this ending was a little uh...rushed? it seemed all too easy.
R.M.Whitaker chapter 18 . 8/26/2004
What? Just an epilogue? What are you talking about? There has to be at least 20 chapters more! You can't end this already!
Wow, that battle was fast. Good, I'm glad! I'm not one for blood and gore.
No see, this can't all end here! Maddock and Iseult have to have some complications! They can't just, "Oh let's get married! All's love and lemon drops!" No! There has to be something in the way. You need to make this story longer!
metropolis noir chapter 17 . 8/25/2004
Alright, I posted a review earlier, but fictionpress ate it.
That was such a wonderful way for Maddock to propose. I like the way you are building the anticipation for the siege of the castle as well, and I really can't wait for Ch. 18!
passion101 chapter 17 . 8/24/2004
Yes! I love weddings! lol, they r a cute couple.
R.M.Whitaker chapter 17 . 8/24/2004
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! It's so sad... and happy all at once! Go Maddock! I'm a hopless romantic, you must excuse me. HURRY UP AND UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER!
R.M.Whitaker chapter 16 . 8/24/2004
I can see how well thought out this chapter was. And I love the way you describe things! Keep it up! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Catherine Carter chapter 17 . 8/24/2004
aww that's great! _ Yay! I hadn't thought he would propose until the very end or something..._
I'm loving the story so far! Thanks for updating so frequently!
passion101 chapter 16 . 8/22/2004
...FILLER! Yay, it was boring, but important to the story.
metropolis noir chapter 16 . 8/20/2004
I like the talk of strategy! And the important thing is that Robert doesn't just accept that Iseult is giving orders - giving a sense of realism to it. I look forward to seeing the assault on the castle!
R.M.Whitaker chapter 15 . 8/19/2004
A! How DARE you leave me hanging like this? I demand that you update this at once! Think of all us, poor readers. You wouldn't be so cruel as to delay the next chapter, would you?
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