Reviews for Old Broken
Jacobey M. Thompson chapter 2 . 3/18/2012
I liked the prologue and the first chapter, but I don't like Blake...he is an ass hole...anyway very few grammatical errors. You need to add a little more description. what did the bedroom look like? The bathroom? The car had great detail. What did the roads they were driving on look like? The scenery? All in all great story I hope to see more. Keep up the good work.

~ Jacobey M. Thompson
Genato chapter 26 . 2/18/2011
Although there were grammatical errors, this story was really great. I really loved her conflicting emotions with Blake, how realistic her comparing Matt to Blake, how you have back stories for other characters, although there were loose ends like, where is Matt's parents? Why does he live alone? Her parents were okay letting her leave, just like that? I dunno, it doesn't add up? What happened to Blake? But hey, still a good story.
chasny chapter 27 . 3/10/2010
great story and charactors a very good read
D Insignia chapter 26 . 1/3/2010
BRAVO! BRAVO! I LAUGHED, I CRIED, I LOVED!
autumn-annette-19 chapter 26 . 3/6/2009
Great story, keep up the good work.
ami chapter 26 . 3/2/2009
Loved this story!
Elodie Wolfe chapter 26 . 2/15/2009
Absolutely amazing. I loved this soo much. Very well written. Matt is my new favorite boy ever. XD

Elodie~
Zamira chapter 26 . 10/30/2008
This was an excellent story! The story-line kept you from not wanting to stop reading. I read the whole thing in about a day, haha.
CrazyCowgirl101 chapter 26 . 7/3/2008
I love it! I love the way that you can take words and fit them into sentences that make the readers feel what the charcters are going through-not many poeple can do that, it's something you should be proud of.

Do you live in Oregon? Have you been to the Burns Mustang center? I have and we really enjoyed it. I have a mustang. I used him in gaming, nut he wasn't as up to seep as i would have liked. Good luck in future riding and horsey stuff!
CrazyCowgirl101 chapter 11 . 7/3/2008
Kinda a dumb question (well not really my trainer saya that there is no such thing as a dumb question but . . .). You ride western . . .right? How long have you been riding? What type of horse do you have?

Okay about the story. . . its GREAT. I spend half od my time on this site and you are the second author that i have come across that can write about horses and get the facts straight. GREAT job, again.
annon chapter 26 . 5/31/2008
i really loved your story- you really gave it heart, i actually laughed and cried! and fell a bit in love with matt lol. i loved what you did with kristen- no developments in her character or relationships seemed rushed or cliche. don't let lack of reviews ever worry u when u write- so many ppl don't review. i hardly ever do, even when i really like a story. your stories truely touch many more people than you'll ever hear from or be aware of. so, thank you.
SickButPretty chapter 19 . 5/26/2008
Hey I've been reading your story, even though I should b doin homework, lol. I've really enjoyed it. Matt's character was more complex than the usual love interest, not immediately appealing but at the same time very likeable by the end (ish.) I'm gonna read the rest soon, I really got hooked on this.
SickButPretty chapter 2 . 5/22/2008
You're a talented writer and your voice is extremely honest. I still had trouble wrapping my head around why she'd stay with Blake but the bit about him holding her definitely illustrates why it would be really hard to give that up. (I've sort of had experiences like that myself, not necessarily physically abusive but just boys that are bad for me that seem really really sweet sometimes : P) I will read the rest when I can but it's exam time and I already feel guilty for slacking off : ( Looking forward to reading some more of your stuff on break.
D-Mish chapter 26 . 5/8/2008
Wonderful, heartwarming story. I loved every minute of it. Not only was it a great plot (orginial and truthful) you have written it so well. I was truely inspired. I'm not a horse person but i do know they are beautiful. I loved how you described the characters and how you made them so real, not perfect but yet it at the same time.

Loved it. Truely a favourite.
ladydragon93 chapter 2 . 5/2/2008
It's interesting, I'd like to see where this goes.
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