Reviews for Bleed Me Dry Before I Die
Eirien chapter 1 . 7/21/2004
I've only just noticed as
I read your poem again that it's acrostic as well. (Yes I know you said that in the summary, but somehow I forgot it.) Wonderfully done! You really are so talented (sorry for repeating myself ;-) ). I've put this on my fave list as well. (Aw, it's already full again ;-; )
Eirien chapter 1 . 7/21/2004
Awesome job. The rhyme and rhythm, and the short, elliptic lines, the fact that you do not form whole sentences but only throw phrases at the reader, adds greatly to the impact of the poem. I love this, the depths of despair and hopelessness in the poem, yet the positive (?) last four lines, they nearly made me cry, the love and loyalty expressed in them, if I read them correctly. I LOVE this poem.
I know I'm repeating myself, and I normally don't like alerting others to my own works in reviews, but please have a look at my "Razor Touch", please. ~
Crimsonoaks chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
that is good. i couldnt understand the ending verse-thingy very well, but the rest i got. i liked this quite a bit. i like the rhyming pattern and the words u used. good job.
do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
This poem had a great rhythm to it. Awesome rhyming. I loved this poem.