Reviews for Change The World
rhyne chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
Hmm... Nice conclusion... Y'know... these poems kinda remind me of a pair that I did... A Mortal's Cry and Death in Waiting... Kind of and kind of not... But oh well... I liked this one... Except the end... I personally think that it would be perfect without the "for I am a dreamer." Or maybe you could switch it around... I am a dreamer... I will change the world... I don't know... Or maybe you could leave it like it is? That works too.