Sexy! Good job.

Great story. Sweet, too.

this was very well written. it was sweet, passionate, and sexy. very nice job.

Good job, keep it up

_ That was great! You managed to make it very hot without it being overly dirty, and it was sweet as well. It reminds me a LOT of me and my girlfriend! Greatest congratulations!

love it! i read this ages ago but i was in denial about being bi then (i dunno Y i would read this if i was in denial but whatever) anyhoo i re-read it and w00t! the best! Thats right i'm bi and i'm proud. lol. okay, sorry bout that. g2g. bi! ~*~confwuzzled~*~

I like this...it's not too long, and the paragraphs aren't all huge edifices - I don't really like text like that. I suppose I'm lazy. And I like the story, too - it feels all light-hearted and care-free. By the way, I read your bio - your 'serious' quotes especially - I'm guessing you like Evanescence too?
P.S. I don't like to beg, but will you read my stories?

well this is all I have to say mmhm... *and sits back*

Great. Now I am going to have another type of fantazes. A trampoline..and uh. great my g/f is going to think I am more of a perve now. lol
Anyway. This was very sweet. Ignoring my first statment/reaction. It was very nice.
Favorite line: I studied her, shadows of the night dancing over her. My eyes took in every inch of her body. Her lips were soft looking and tempting. I chewed my bottom lip to keep from kissing her.
Something I would say, but probably better.

i loved it...it had me...uh *clears her throat* yea. very good storie..keep up the good work!

Well written, put together nicely. I like how I get background on the characters.

That was beautiful.

That was really sweet! Though I really doubt it's NC-17. And you should think of cutting out that warning bit on your summary or an Admin will remove you, and it's quite unnecessary. Keep up the good work!
Kudos and Kisses,
Anathema Ceres

i dont see the big thing to make it rated r but i liked it
the story seems natural not forced
great job
live on the edge...