Reviews for Marriage
this is britt chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
thank you so much for writing this. thank you. I try to use my poetry to say something, too, but I can't overcome those damn angst-ridden poems. But thank you for writing this, I'm completely with you on this one.
ICU2 chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
great great poem, love it
holocaustpulp chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
I agree with this message, but I am not the person to appreciate this type of light-harted poetry, I must admit. Nevertheless, it compelled me enough to read the entire poem.
Story-Teller's Aide chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
i really don't think you had to add that note at the end; your poem is escellent! some of the lines are just beautiful;
Love is not coated
by pre-set limits
but rainbowed
with the streaks
of life
that in particular just blew me away. so, so beautiful!
i'm adding it to my favourites list :)