sometimes the poems that take the longest to write are the most beautiful. though im not christian, i can easily respect the sentiments of the poem. peace be with you.

it spoke ages of truth in a few lines. Great job, I loved it.

I myself am not a religious man, but I do respect the power of religion. It's a power that comes through in this poem, and it's a power that can indeed bring about peace. It's a shame that some people see the need to use it for war. :( Beautiful work, keep it up!

Beautiful, really. And thank you for reviewing my poem, I appreciated it.

Amen! Great message, awesome job! Thanks for your kind review. God Bless!
Needa S.

This was a short but brilliant piece. Nice descriptions and ideas. You seemed to write from the heart on this and it showed through. Wonderful job. Keep writing. * smiles and now feels at peace*

wowie! I love it! It's very true! Jesus does have a way of doing that... But this is very figurative, and it has a really great meaning. I love it!
~Lauren

Peace: It's something we all aspire to have, yet we can never have it 100%. To some degree, I comply, but under the extreme cirumstances, I believe it's possible (try nuking and killing all but 2 people, and see if they still fight each other lolz)
The poem is well written, and I kinda expect that from you now; I'm a fan of your work, and you have loads of talent! I like the rhyming, but not sure if 'are' and 'war' ryhme? Maybe in the US (I'm from the UK)?
9/10

Lovely, I like the message. Though on earth it is quite hard to maintain that inner peace perfectly ... But the ending is effective, a strong point to finish with.