you have a liot to work on. not the best, but not the most orrible either

aw! That is so adorable! Do they end up dating when they're older? Jeremy seems like a nice guy, really sweet. _ I can't wait for the exciting parts, do those happen when Kyra's older, or is that in the sequel? Great story! Keep it up! _

Jeremy is so very cute with Kyra. *squeals* I'm not so sure about Ronnie and Ry. Thye are downright annoying, rude, and selfish. They both wanna grown up too fast... poor them. _~ Update soon!

Oh okay, that was overly creepy. What's wrong with Kyra and what's up with Amelia's husband? He doesn't seem very responsible. Kyra is Amelia's third child... Where are the other two? And what's up with Kyra's eyes? Sorry if I'm asking so much.

hey I liked it so far! update son!

This is awesome! It gave me the full blown shivers! I will soon read and review the rest of the story! Keep up the good work! I would suggest that you work on discriptions a bit more.