Well then, good luck to you...

good. Good. GOOD! You have to update. It is a plea. I beg you, plleeaassee update. I really like how you incorporate description into the storyline, a lot of writers don't do that. They just have dialog. Great job and keep up the good work.

Hey I loved your story and I broke my own rule to start reading a story without it being completed, so now you have to complete it even if its just for me (so I'm egotistical, I know it).

I love the idea how she's moving away and I feel I can completly relate to Hannah because I have two big brothers and they have offered "to take your friend to have a talk in the bushes" before. My brothers are soo protective and its really sweet but totally annoying. I don't think I'll ever find a guy good enough for them LOL.

I love this Chris character and would love to see some more of him. Plus only Hannah and Jorden know he's gay, thats something wonderful huh, cool to play with.

These are just my suggestions if you get completly blocked and just want to experiment. To me it seems that the brothers were all complete players until their Dad died and Hannah's mum had to go through all of that while they basically took over. It seems that the mum doesn't really have much of a say in things any more, she has respect but yeah. So in the boys moving away AND Hannah, what would that do to her, how would she feel, would she want to cling to Hannah?

You could concentrate more on the whole Lacey Jacey (hehe it ryhmes)romantic interest with Hannah being sad walking in on Jace yelling at Lacey because she's moving away. Then move to concentrate on Lacey while she tries to get set up with random loser guys to make herself that her "feelings" for Jace is just an imagination while Hannah tries to go along without laughing, feeling too depressed or wondering how on earth she didn't know. It would be fun like 'serial' dating.

Carter could decide he wants to go to college... do something really weird but suits him like... PSYCHOLOGY aahahahahah what a joke. No you could do that I suppose.

I love brainstorming ideas for stories so if you're having trouble heres my email ''

but otherwise this is me begging you to finish this story please please please.

hey. i just read this story again and noticed that you havent updated since forever, and i read the authors note u wrote for chap 18 and i understand that you're experiencing some sort of writers bloke and i can also understand why, as you said because you got your heart broken. But i was thinking maybe you could use that and the emotions in your writing. Im not sure what i want to happen, but i still think this story has awhile to go, i mean Hannah still has to go to California, and maybe when she's there she can begin to start getting over raythe, well not really, but at least moving on and then all the boys should come and visit her and lace in california. Just an idea. It's really up to you and what you think is right. Which im sure will be great anyway, seeing as though you've done so well so far with the story. So as you can tell i love it and i would really like it if you updated soon!

This was so good!

I love this story, and can not wait for you to continue on with it :)Just to let you know, you've talked about doing a chapter in Raythe's POV, which I would advise you not to. If you do, please make it in third person, and not first person. Just a little pet peeve of mine, it's annoying when people have more than one character in first person, as when you read a book you never see that. Just some were asking for ideas, some what I thought you could do is maybe show her life in California some, and her maturing while she's there. Maybe involve a guy over there. But then when she comes back a few months later to visit her family, show her mature to Raythe. Just an idea, as a I have no idea what your whole plan for the story is. Anyways, I do love this story, and hope you update soon :)

ah... Update as soon as you feel better kae?(:

please tell me you are going to contine very soon! its very well written! -always milz

I just read your story in one sitting that time, I have no life. I love it. I hope you can find some inspiration soon. It'd be great if you finished this. Update soon :)

harlo.. hope u're feelin better.. it juz sucks when our own personal life affects how we write the story.. aniwaes, i really hope u're moving on fine & i wish u all the bez.. hope u'll find some ideas on how to update the story.. take care fren!

omg! ive been reading this story all morning! and then suddenly.. no more!'( wahah! please please please update soon! raythe is so freaking hot! but i hate how he dosnt love her! wtf _ hes so stupid! Its great that Hannah is hot. ) Im so tired of the cliches where girls are unattractive. Its not that I think everyone has to be hot.. but everyone looks pretty if theyre healthy, in nice clothes and fixed their hair. Hannah is a really refreshing character. ) But I hate that hannah admitted that she loved him.. and that hes all sympathetic and stuff. gr. I want him to have to chase her! please please please make it that lyk.. once they finally meet again.. she thinks dat shez over him.. but he falls in love with her.. and she rejects him (muahhahaha xD im evil i know)..but then realises that she still loves him too.. after a while. D ahaha.

i hope everything goes well for you.. senior year does seem really stressful and busy. ill be patiently (not really.. but i try ") waiting for the next chapter. Whatever you do.. do NOT give up on this! This is such a wonderful story.. and to leave it when its almost finished would be so dreadful! Its such a wonderful story, and youre such a good writer. )

xxoo~ n[a]ivete chic[a]

heya, this is a great story. i love it so far and can't wait for more. i can understand about infrequent updates cos i'm in yr 12 too. good luck with everything, cya later ~ Alenor.

You don't even know how much i'd love you if you updated! This is seriously an awesome story and you're going on my favorites list, but I want to encourage you to update because after all of this wonderful work that you probably worked really hard on, now is not the time to give up. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE...I read this in one shot and I'm already such a fan!

being a senior this year, i know exactly how you feel. With colleges and the fact that it's your final year of being in that school ( if i'm not mistaken that ur in h.s ).

With the helping in your writer block, i can't really that mcuh since i'm kinda going threw the same thing with a story i'm curently writing.

Hope that things have been looking up for you, jus rememeber, boys are losers, their weill b some and the other. Yet again if we think about we can't live without them. If ur asking me what point is... I don't know. I guess i started babbling. (lol)

b e way loved the story, it's great.

i no im sending this from the first chapter, but that only b/c i read this story before and was to lazy to go to the last chapter to review... im really sorry about you situation. and although im not a senior i'm close to enough seniors to know that the work can get tough... so please update when you can, and your feeling up to it. im sure all of us would appreciate it. you're an awesome writer.~dancrchick~